Song Parodies -> Making My Revisions
| Original Song Title: | "Losing My Religion" |
| Original Performer: | REM |
| Parody Song Title: | "Making My Revisions" |
| Parody Written by: | Ethan Mawyer |
this is quite exaggerated - i usually do one draft for songs unless the pacing is awful
I write a lot
A lot more than most
And most do not know
The lengths that I will go to
To get the pacing right
Oh no I changed too much
I messed it up
That's me at the keyboard
That's me up late at night
Making my revisions
Trying to make it funny
But I think I am lacking humor
Oh no I changed too much
Haven't changed enough
I thought that I was inspired
I thought I would make you laugh
I think I might have thought too much
Every daydream
I would like to convert it
Into a submission
Trying to make the top ten list
But I hardly ever seem to, to
I think I write too much
Not all good stuff
Want to submit
Want to submit
The song of the century
Want to submit
A song that's perfect
Hundreds of votes
What if I used a tune that
Nobody knows
I still think too much
I thought that you all would love it
Thought I was onto something
I think I thought I'd get all fives
But I just got two threes
I just got two threes
But I just got two threes
Sad, mad, not glad
I just got two threes
Just two threes, just two threes
Threes
A lot more than most
And most do not know
The lengths that I will go to
To get the pacing right
Oh no I changed too much
I messed it up
That's me at the keyboard
That's me up late at night
Making my revisions
Trying to make it funny
But I think I am lacking humor
Oh no I changed too much
Haven't changed enough
I thought that I was inspired
I thought I would make you laugh
I think I might have thought too much
Every daydream
I would like to convert it
Into a submission
Trying to make the top ten list
But I hardly ever seem to, to
I think I write too much
Not all good stuff
Want to submit
Want to submit
The song of the century
Want to submit
A song that's perfect
Hundreds of votes
What if I used a tune that
Nobody knows
I still think too much
I thought that you all would love it
Thought I was onto something
I think I thought I'd get all fives
But I just got two threes
I just got two threes
But I just got two threes
Sad, mad, not glad
I just got two threes
Just two threes, just two threes
Threes
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Good job! This one's been around a while, but I see that no one commented yet. Oh well, I thought it was good. :)
It was pretty good, IMO.
Hey, yeah, this is good!
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