Song Parodies -> Slave On

Original Song Title:

"Rave On"

Original Performer:

Buddy Holly

  
Parody Song Title:

"Slave On"

Parody Written by:

Rick Duncan

Another in my disgruntled housewife series
Little chores I gotta do
Dishes and the laundry too
Slave on, it's never-endin'
I'm tired of lifting, bendin'
When you say, get to work, slave on

The way I work for little pay
I'm stuck in this damn house all day
Slave on, don't feel the lovin'
I cook and clean the oven
Yes, you say, where's my food, slave on

Slave on, this wife's rebellin'
I'm not doin' any yellin'
No more your socks I'm smellin'
Now I am free

Drivin', drivin' I'm leavin'
And there won't be no grievin'
Law says we split things even
But we will see
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John Barry - November 12, 2004 - Report this comment
Serf's up.
Paul Robinson - November 12, 2004 - Report this comment
Nice job, Rick...Now take out the papers and the trash while you are at it...5's...or telll the wife to do it...(Ooh, I'm liable to hear from Mari about that line...)
Johnny D - November 12, 2004 - Report this comment
I sense an angstrom of angst in the final couplet.
alvin rhodes - November 12, 2004 - Report this comment
raves for your slave..5s
MasonR - November 12, 2004 - Report this comment
Nice job on one of my favorite Buddy Holly songs! 555!

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