Song Parodies -> Slave On
| Original Song Title: | "Rave On" |
| Original Performer: | Buddy Holly |
| Parody Song Title: | "Slave On" |
| Parody Written by: | Rick Duncan |
Another in my disgruntled housewife series
Little chores I gotta do
Dishes and the laundry too
Slave on, it's never-endin'
I'm tired of lifting, bendin'
When you say, get to work, slave on
The way I work for little pay
I'm stuck in this damn house all day
Slave on, don't feel the lovin'
I cook and clean the oven
Yes, you say, where's my food, slave on
Slave on, this wife's rebellin'
I'm not doin' any yellin'
No more your socks I'm smellin'
Now I am free
Drivin', drivin' I'm leavin'
And there won't be no grievin'
Law says we split things even
But we will see
Dishes and the laundry too
Slave on, it's never-endin'
I'm tired of lifting, bendin'
When you say, get to work, slave on
The way I work for little pay
I'm stuck in this damn house all day
Slave on, don't feel the lovin'
I cook and clean the oven
Yes, you say, where's my food, slave on
Slave on, this wife's rebellin'
I'm not doin' any yellin'
No more your socks I'm smellin'
Now I am free
Drivin', drivin' I'm leavin'
And there won't be no grievin'
Law says we split things even
But we will see
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Serf's up.
Nice job, Rick...Now take out the papers and the trash while you are at it...5's...or telll the wife to do it...(Ooh, I'm liable to hear from Mari about that line...)
I sense an angstrom of angst in the final couplet.
raves for your slave..5s
Nice job on one of my favorite Buddy Holly songs! 555!
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