Song Parodies -> Trouble on the Line

Original Song Title:	"Trouble on the Line"
Original Performer:	Sawyer Brown

Parody Song Title:	"Trouble on the Line"
Parody Written by:	Wolverine

Moderator I must have a bad connection
If you've got someone readin' me
I changed the tempo, then I changed the song
Moderator can't you see

There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line

Moderator my funny bone's been disconnected
I've lost my mental faculties
I don't have a choice
Just send me your invoice
Moderator help me please

There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line

There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line

No matter what the song is
I'm having trouble on the line

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AFW - March 12, 2007 - Report this comment

Nice idea and clever switching

Wolverine - March 12, 2007 - Report this comment

Thanks AFW.

Agrimorfee - March 16, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3) DKTOS, but it reads well. I can tell you were trying to retain the spirit of the original...maybe did it too well.

Michael McVey - March 21, 2007 - Report this comment

Well, Agri, maybe he had writer's block (lol). Seriously, good work.---MM

Wolverine - March 21, 2007 - Report this comment

Thanks Agri and MM. Actually, I'm having more writer's block on a U song. I've submitted one, but I'm not sure if I want that for the ABC U contest. Just haven't come up with anything else.

bobpiecheese - March 24, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3-T) I have a soft spot for parodies about parodies (it's just below my belly button). This one hits it dead centre.

Jason - March 24, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3T) Again I DKTOS, but read well.

Cat - March 24, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC) DKTOS, and you could've varied a bit more, but I can identify with this.

Max Power - March 24, 2007 - Report this comment

ABC - Good

Wolverine - March 26, 2007 - Report this comment

Thanks Bob, Jason, Cat, and Max. Bob, I'll try to keep it more above-the-belt next time. :-) Cat, that's something I'm trying to work on. I'm used to going with the song. If the original repeats, I repeat. It was mentioned on another parody I had previously wrote that I submitted here as well.

Stuart McArthur - March 26, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3T) too much repetition to score votes Wolverine, but a good idea - I guess you had trouble on the lines - 555 (and re your last comment, yes, although it makes logical sense to repeat lines if the OS has done that, it's become a bit of a thing at amiright that you put the extra work in anyway, to avoid boring repetition and to make it more enjoyable for the reader) - 555

Rick C - March 26, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3T) Not a lot to this one but, I did find it interesting.

Matthias - March 27, 2007 - Report this comment

Not bad for a n00b, you'll learn my friend, you'll learn

Kristof Robertson - March 27, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3T) I really like the idea behind this, Wolfy. As has been said already, you need to vary the choruses and not leave too much of the OS in, but overall a good effort. 555

Wolverine - March 27, 2007 - Report this comment

Thank you Stuart, Rick C, Matthias, and Kristof.

Johnny D - March 27, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC) Well-structured, could have used more variation in the choruses, but a good effort.

Red Ant - March 28, 2007 - Report this comment

(ABC3-T) It's not often I agree with everyone above me, but so it is here. Sorry to have trouble voting 5s, but 544 was the best I could do. Still, not bad at all. Keep writing!

Arwen - March 28, 2007 - Report this comment

ABC...I once called myself a pretty big Sawyer Brown fan...and this reminds me of a fun "oldie" of sorts. I've had trouble with a lot of lines in my time doing parodies...so I can relate, too.

Jack Wilson - March 28, 2007 - Report this comment

Pretty good, 5s

Jeff Reuben - March 28, 2007 - Report this comment

I remember Sawyer Brown. Not bad, I agree with the variation on choruses comments.

Wolverine - March 28, 2007 - Report this comment

Thanks Johnny D, Red Ant, Arwen, Jack, and Jeff.

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