Song Parodies -> Just When She's Bleedin'

Original Song Title:

"Just What I Needed"

Original Performer:

The Cars

  
Parody Song Title:

"Just When She's Bleedin'"

Parody Written by:

Malcolm Higgins

inspired by agrimorfree's "crimson tide"
you don't want to come in here
she's nasty, it's her time,
her panty liner's red and smeared,
and covered up with slime,
extra perfume's what she wears
to hide that odour from there
you don't want to come in here
until she says she is fine
little string is hangin out
it's in there tight and deep
she doesn't care how good I've been
she's bleating like a sheep, yeah
she always tries to hide it well
but I can still sense that bad smell
little string is hangin out
and though it sits in there deep..

I guess it's just when she's bleedin'
another egg she has freed
I guess it's just when she's bleedin
now she's unable to breed


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Pacing: 3.8
 
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Overall Rating: 3.5
 

Total Votes: 4
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Agrimorfee - May 21, 2008 - Report this comment
Ewww....I shoulda guessed that you would take the subject matter to a different level! Wasn't there more to the song than what you parodied here?
McKludge - May 21, 2008 - Report this comment
Yeah, I think you took a few steps over the line on this one, Malcolm (slime?). It's still funny, but some subjects are funnier when {ahem} handled delicately. And pacing was off by a syllable on lines 5 and 6. 444
Aggy - there is. The third verse is a repeat of the first, but still should have been included.

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