Finally tackled that song that you wanted to do. Good job with it too... You should record this one.

It isn't the moral dilemmas we face during the 12 days of Christmas, it's the ones we ignore during the other 353 days...

Big smile over the iCare line, but drawing to mind your winning stab at JC (Johnny Cash, not Jesus Christ) I thought you did'nt care... ;-)

Awesome job, awesome start for Sled Zeppelin

beautifully written...especially liked 'icare"

dktos, but I know your pacing is escellent and the mesage was SUBERB! ( I liked the iCare line too). 5's

Yes, the iCare was key and I loved the 364 line too! 555. I must be Going to California, the security code is LAX, I kid you not.

I must echo Peter and alvin.

Great parody for Cyber Monday. You clicked the mouse right into the red.

iCare
youCare
he,she,itCares
WiiCare
youCare
theyCare

Who cares - here just take these 5s.

Very well done... 5-5-5

Awesome job Jack to a classic Led Zepplin song. Season of cash - common God That they trust - good as gold

Excellent parody. The iCare was the best of several creative lines. I might be missing something since everybody else has awarded this parody 5s for pacing, but I had to deduct a point because "commercial" has 3 syllables and "California" has 4.

Being someone that WORKS in the "Wal-Mart machine", I can tell you that what you said was 100%...ACCURATE! Well done! Fives...out of five!

Overall good work! here's an early christmas gift: 555

Thanks to Matthias & Peter & Jack & Alvin & Pat & Rick & PMS & Guy & Macphisto & Dave & John J!

John J first: (I was hoping I could get away without explaining this one -- ho ho ho!) Yes, there is a syllable difference between "California" and "Commercial". At face value, they are also stressed quite differently from each other. However, Robert Plant utterly obliterates the "to" in the title (as well as elsewhere in the song), so it's sung more like "Goin' California" (or "Go ta California"), with the 1st, 3rd and 5th syllables stressed (6 syllables total). "Growin' Too Commerical", despite the syllable shift of the "too", is also 6 syllables, 1st, 3rd and 5th stressed. "Snow in Minnesota" would be another perfect title fit despite the apparent lost syllable. But thank you much, sir!

Matthias: I've wanted to do TOS for ages. I stalled with the idea "Getting Geriatric", probably for the best... Recording this would be fairly easy, all I need is a guitar and a mandolin (there are no backing tracks I know of).

Peter: As Christmas starts here the day after Thanksgiving, it's more like 32 days this year instead of 12. As for the i Care (I should work for Apple...), it's more a satircal jibe at "must-have" products: I could really care less about iPhones and most of the other commercial crap that is incessantly foisted upon us this time of year.

Thanks to everyone else who commented as well on the "iCare": it was a spur of the moment creation, nothing that had been "saved up", so to speak. Good friends, great comments: what more could a guy want?

(okay, a trailer and an ATV would be nice... :D)

Thanks Chris and Joel! I missed you while typing my above reply. Chris: Glad you liked the Wal-Mart dig. And my condolences. ;)