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Song Parodies -> "On Smoke Over the Line"

Original Song Title:

"One Toke Over the Line"

Original Performer:

Brewer and Shipley

Parody Song Title:

"On Smoke Over the Line"

Parody Written by:

Rick Duncan

The Lyrics

Just like writing these---I can quit whenever I want to.....
One smoke over the line, dear doctor
One smoke over the line
Sittin' in here with no respiration
Did not quit them in time
Never thought that it would get me, it's scary
Thought that I would always be fine
Puffin' all day since my graduation
One smoke over the line

Whooo, did I love that stuff in me
Now I'm in trouble as you can plainly see
I felt immortal, I didn't heed advice that those warnings said
I wish the blame could fall on someone else, now I'll soon be dead

One smoke over the line, dear doctor
One smoke over the line
Waitin' in here for my medication
Did not quit them in time
Never thought that it would get me, it's scary
Thought that I would always be fine
Puffin' all day since my graduation
One smoke over the line

I'm gonna miss my lovely wife
Not gonna see my kids enjoy their life
There are so many things I'm not gonna do
I was so surprised, I didn't have the slightest clue
I told myself the lies and now I'm

One smoke over the line, dear doctor
One smoke over the line
Waitin' in here for an operation
Did not quit them in time
Never thought that it would get me, it's scary
Thought that I would always \be fine
It's a bit late for my education
One smoke over the line

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Jack Wilson - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
DKTOS, but great parody, 5's!
Tim Hall - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
Great Job. Remember that Philip Morris changed their name to Altria.
Johnny D - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
5's, and I think Philip Morris changed their name to Altria because they were sick of being referred-to as Fill-Up Morgues.
Paul Wooten - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
Excellent . Stil wish I could quit, maybe this will inspire me. Great original tune also
alvin rhodes - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
this ex smoker gave ya 5s for this fine parody
Diva - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
Great Work! YES I VOTED! =)
Paul Robinson - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
Rick D - Didn't know anyone here even knew who Brewer and Shipley were! Love their stuff but haven't parodied any because of that. Of course this was their "bullet" so the other stuff might not be well known. Great Job!! 5-5-5
Guy - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
Smokin'!
Jonathan C. - February 23, 2004 - Report this comment
Finally, a funny parody that doesn't glamorize smoking or pretend that it's against smoking. 5mg.
Jan Unwin - February 24, 2004 - Report this comment
Ah....the nonfiltered truth. 5-5-5

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