(SOTM) Wish it were funnier.

I'm sorry Max, I'm going to have to agree with Agrimorfee, it wasn't exactly humerous

(SOTM) Max, if I can give you some advice, try doing longer songs with more well-known subject matter. Doing things like this just confuses people...and the iffy pacing doesn't help.

(SOTM) Max, I'm torn here between leaving a lame, cop-out "good" and saying what I truly think, but I'm going with the latter. You picked a great OS, and had a really good parody and execution through the first verse and chorus, but after that it kind of falls apart. You missed the "all you get is pain" line in the second verse (as well as rhymed "out" with itself), then copy/paste the chorus, which uses the same "head/dead" rhyme couplet as the first verse. There is more song after the second chorus, and by not changing up the choruses, or doing the parts after the second chorus you lost chances to make this a funnier parody. 433

SOTM - I didn't get it. Well, there's always next time for you.

(SOTM) I always get confused with any parody that's politics-related, no matter what OS or which author.

(SOTM) I'm sorry, Max, but an a non-American who doesn't follow your nation's politics too closely, this did nothing for me....and I didn't understand what it was about.

(SOTM) I'm too young to understand

www.whatsitallabout.com? confused i am ! cowley who he ?

(SOTM)Eh. Great OS,wish it was funnier too

(SOTM) was this about American Idol? and that Simon Cowley? (is that his name?) - I think your fury at Cowley was what drove this parody Max, rather than providing entertainment for us readers - nothing wrong with that as long as you're not eager to get SOTM votes, and a lot of entrants submit just to get a wider audience, so that's okay too

I never followed American Idol, but I suppose if I were the left-out candidate I'd feel like writing something like this.---MM

SOTM - I'm somewhat comforted, but also saddened that I'm not the only one who's who's clueless about this parody.

This parody is disturbing -- it made me laugh and I don't know why.

'fraid I couldn't make head nor tail of this one.

Bit rough around the edges, I think. But I love this parody because of the comments it has inspired. I love the fact that you annoyed or confused everyone who came to read this parody. I love the fact that it's not about POLITICS, but rather BASEBALL POLITICS. and it's not about simon COWELL from American Idol, but simon COWLEY from the baseball world. You confused everyone, Max. That is glorious.

(SOTM) Very funny.