Song Parodies -> A 'Cleaned' Up Song

Original Song Title:

"You Talk Too Much"

Original Performer:

Joe Jones

  
Parody Song Title:

"A 'Cleaned' Up Song"

Parody Written by:

Adagio

You stink too much,
Go hurry take a bath
You stink too much,
You smell worse than my pet

You just stink,
Stink too much

You're knockin' out people
With your bad blow
You're toxin' out people
Wherever you go

Take a bath
Pleeeze, right now

See, I bought for your tub
At one of those shops
Soap and one of those scrubs
Pull out all the stops.

I smell now,
A very clean you.

INSTRUMENTAL INTERLUDE

REPEAT ALL

INSTRUMENTAL TO END
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Guy DiRito - August 06, 2003 - Report this comment
Why'd you clean 'em up? I hate happy endings. This one liked to blow me away, whew. Nice internal rhyme you got going for you on this one, Pat.
Pat - August 06, 2003 - Report this comment
Thanks muchly, Guy :D
Michael Pacholek - August 06, 2003 - Report this comment
I like happy endings. I guess Guy's favorite Star Trek movie is "The Wrath of Khan" (Spock dies, temporarily), and his favorite Star Wars movie is "The Empire Strikes Back" (Luke just can't cut it, but his Dad can, and Han is given the cold shoulder by Lando).
Pat - August 06, 2003 - Report this comment
Thanks Michael

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