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Song Parodies -> "While I So Far Onward Creep"

Original Song Title:

"While My Guitar Gently Weeps"

Original Performer:

Beatles

Parody Song Title:

"While I So Far Onward Creep"

Parody Written by:

Adagio

The Lyrics

I look at that pall, talk of care that I'm keeping.
While I so far onward creep
It looks like a chore but it's one that needs keeping
But I thus far wish for leaps
I don't know why embodied to you any but slime void of
And that is how someone controlled you.
They sought and fooled you.

The world does look swirled, but it looks like I'm learning
While I so far onward creep
All that I partake, even bad, must be earning
While I so far onward creep.

Look at that brow, you were deserted
You were inverted too
And I know now you were subverted
Someone alerted you.

I look at that pall, talk of care that I'm keeping.
While I so far onward creep.
See all the pall....
Will I at all onward creep?

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Pacing: 4.8
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Overall Rating: 4.3

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Johnny D - January 19, 2005 - Report this comment
555 ... heh heh heh ... I love it when you post something that gets 'em scratchin' their heads.
Adagio - January 19, 2005 - Report this comment
Thanks heaps, Johnny!
Serafina - January 19, 2005 - Report this comment
I like it too...5-5-5. ;)
Jeff Reuben - January 19, 2005 - Report this comment
I'm one of 'em that's scratchin my head =) It made me think of role playing games (Elder Scrolls Morrowind...I'm in the middle of that one right now), and while that probably wasn't the intention, it did have me reading and re-reading the song and thinking about it. So that's a good thing.
Adagio - January 19, 2005 - Report this comment
Thanks Serafina and Jeff!
Paul Robinson - January 22, 2005 - Report this comment
Very nice job...creeping along cautiously...pace to perfection (of course) and lyrics fit tone/mood and flow of OS beautifully...yes, the "swirling" you mention...the song has THAT feel to it, too...swirling up a few fives for you here...
Adagio - January 22, 2005 - Report this comment
Thanks Paul!

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