I like your political stuff, but I know what you mean. I've taken a break from political songs as well. I figure I'll release my political one of Sarah McLachlan's "Fallen" a few weeks from now....

John, This one strikes me as a little too grim, even for my taste. It's well written but I'll refrain from voting rather than try to assign any scores here. You've written some really sharp political parodies here and I think a number of folks appreciate them(including me). You noted that you plan to cut back on these from now on. My suggestion would be to continue to write them but to try and write some parodies in the more humorous vein to kind of leaven the mixture. That way you will avoid getting pigeon-holed as being solely a political parody writer. Given the quality of your postings so far I think a lighter touch will give you a much greater audience. You may also find that when you've reached more folks with a lighter touch you may get a few more looks & votes when you do throw a political parody in now and then...Geez, I just went back and re-read this - it's really extremely well-written and on point, but SO grim and graphic. Well, think I'll mix in a little self-promotion with all my well-meant advice here: If you are interested I wrote one using this original song about the Super Bowl Haltime Show fiasco with Janet Jackson. It's called "A Boob At The Half" and can be found on my Author's page.

How many cold would there be if Albert had won back that fall? Exactly as many, since he DID win back that fall, but was denied the chance to accept his rightfully-won victory by the Bush regime. Oh yeah, as if it was only an afterthought: Great parody.

Umm, I liked it. For the record, I gave 5 in funny because I liked it.

Pacholek--Albert didn't win Tennessee, a place that's seen him up close and personal.