Song Parodies -> Sleep (4 AM)
| Original Song Title: | "Breathe (2 AM)" |
| Original Performer: | Anna Nalick |
| Parody Song Title: | "Sleep (4 AM)" |
| Parody Written by: | Abbott Skelding |
4 AM and she yells from the top the stairs
"You got to go to school, and i say who cares?
I just can't go to sleep, and i do not know the reason"
Now i walk through the door with half open eyes
Like they have any right at all to criticize,
Hypocrites. I really hate the entire school season
'Cause i can't go to sleep, but i wish i was able
Can't go to sleep anywhere, i just tried the table
I can not find a real nice pillow now
I'll cradle my head in my hands
And sleep, just sleep
Oh sleep, just sleep
It's May, day 21 i can't take much more of this
There's no way i am anywhere close to a bliss
"Ain't been sleeping, I've just been weeping since last week"
Here at home you can tell i've been tired for a while
And my God, it feels like i just ran 20 miles
Wanna go now, and then i'll just sleep about it
There's a pillow at each end of my king size
I dream cause if there is not, then i'll be forced to scream
And this mistake i've made, i won't make it again
I almost just slept on the ground
2 PM and i'm still asleep, inside my bed
If i get it all out in this sleep, it's no longer inside of me
Threatning the life it belongs to
And in a dream, i'm naked in front of a crowd
Then i wake up real fast and i'm screaming out loud
And i know that i can't go to sleep because of this dream
"You got to go to school, and i say who cares?
I just can't go to sleep, and i do not know the reason"
Now i walk through the door with half open eyes
Like they have any right at all to criticize,
Hypocrites. I really hate the entire school season
'Cause i can't go to sleep, but i wish i was able
Can't go to sleep anywhere, i just tried the table
I can not find a real nice pillow now
I'll cradle my head in my hands
And sleep, just sleep
Oh sleep, just sleep
It's May, day 21 i can't take much more of this
There's no way i am anywhere close to a bliss
"Ain't been sleeping, I've just been weeping since last week"
Here at home you can tell i've been tired for a while
And my God, it feels like i just ran 20 miles
Wanna go now, and then i'll just sleep about it
There's a pillow at each end of my king size
I dream cause if there is not, then i'll be forced to scream
And this mistake i've made, i won't make it again
I almost just slept on the ground
2 PM and i'm still asleep, inside my bed
If i get it all out in this sleep, it's no longer inside of me
Threatning the life it belongs to
And in a dream, i'm naked in front of a crowd
Then i wake up real fast and i'm screaming out loud
And i know that i can't go to sleep because of this dream
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i heard the original onece before and i like it but the funny thing is when i heard this on i couldn't sleep so i was watching mtv videos and this video to this song came on. And i still couldn't go to sleep and that sucked!!!!! great song
[SOTM] DKTOS...But a very....interesting read. Like the way you captured the feeling of fatigue by comparing it with a 20 mile run. Good stuff : )
[SOTM] Interesting idea. Well done.
(SOTM) I can REALLY relate to this Abbott. Great job.
SOTM--I love the OS...and I love sleeping...=) Nice job...
(SOTM) DKTOS
(SOTM) HTOS (hate the original song), but I won't let that get in the way of my saying you did a nice job, good work
SOTM
SOTM-Well done, clever rhymes, and matches the original well!
Any chance there's a recording of this somewhere on the net? I've searched, but unsuccesfully so far, unless you count Russian pages which also offers Anna Nichole Nude pictures, i.e virusalert galore!
cute play on the title. reading this gets me scared i wont be able to sleep. i should have watched a horror movie instead. just saw a show yesterday about 'fatal familial insomnia' - yeesh. good job.
(SOTM) Have you commented on any of the other parodies yet? I believe Claude's comment was directed at you, since at the time you voted, you had not left a comment on any parodies in this contest. I DNKOS here, so no vote or comment from me.
(sotm) nice work - it read like a weird dream too, Abbott - and I just noticed Dee's comment, so I'll check that out before I vote
(SOTM) This CPAP-user can relate!
(SOTM) I don't think I've done anything over 3 days without sleep. A 5 for each day...
Hmm... I remember looking at this one earlier, and must have voted 'cause the vote didn't take just now. But I obviously forgot to comment... anyway, I can sympathise, as I can't get to sleep ('cause I've got a load of SOTM parodies still to read)
(SOTM) DKTOS, but as a long standing insomniac, I can relate!
SOTM.. Sadly I DKTOS as well. But still a very interesting parody and something I can truly relate too. Good job. 555
DKTOS but I hate leaving it at that. It's decent as a free-read and I enjoyed the opening 'stairs/cares' couplet.
Blimey, I just submitted 'Snooze Control' and now find that you've already covered the topic of... bed covers... Nice rhyming.
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