This is my honest opinion Dave I hope you will not get mad at me. Your vocal arrangement suck in this song. Your words also is not clear to me. Havent you heard the original performance of UB 40? Try to use the vocaloid its easy to use. I havent reached the full potential yet of the said program but if you were able to hear the professional recording of the said software you will be amazed and you can parody some songs performed by female artists. Or try to apply some compression in your vocals also some reverb and voice modeler. WAtch out for my video production of this red red wine. Got a parody lyrics for this one entitled red red eyes. Dont worry this is singable to me and i will not use the vocaloid. Give me few days I have a clinic to do but I will try to insert this production in between my job.

I hate vocoder, everyone is entitled to their opinion, but having heard the two you did--I'm sorry, but why on Earth would anyone want to listen to that--it's not human at all. I realize, from your conversation, that you don't speak English as a primary language--which may be why it is difficult for you to understand my words, not as an insult--just a statement of fact. I obviously have heard UB40s--or I would have struggled through the song, which I did not. Again, you are entitled to your opinion, but I'll stick to my natural vocals without vocoder, excessive reverb or voice modeler. . .that is one thing about my songs is I only use editing to the extent it is absolutely necessary. . .