Song Parodies -> I Hear You Knocking
| Original Song Title: | "I Hear You Knocking" |
| Original Performer: | Gale Storm/Dave Edmunds |
| Parody Song Title: | "I Hear You Knocking" |
| Parody Written by: | LucidLupin LeeBee |
Inspired after being in receipt of some empty insulting type comments to a parody on here..... I don't object to criticism and welcome dialogue..... I think the words of this parody are self explanatory........... dedicated to the people who didnt give names or pretended to be other people.... they who know who they are.... ;)
You slagged off my parody short time ago
And now you're back knocking them some more
I hear you knocking
But not sayin' anything
I hear you knocking
Your eloquence is thin
You insult quite low but you don't say why
Is intelligence lacking or can't you try?
I hear you knocking
Swearing's wearin' thin
I hear you knocking
Try and do it again
If foaming insults are all you do
Your message sure aint gonna get through
I hear you knocking
But I've no chagrin
I hear you knocking
I'll take it on the chin
Constructive criticism might set you free
From your crass meat head mentality
I hear you knocking
But not sayin' anything
I hear you knocking
Go back to your bin!
And now you're back knocking them some more
I hear you knocking
But not sayin' anything
I hear you knocking
Your eloquence is thin
You insult quite low but you don't say why
Is intelligence lacking or can't you try?
I hear you knocking
Swearing's wearin' thin
I hear you knocking
Try and do it again
If foaming insults are all you do
Your message sure aint gonna get through
I hear you knocking
But I've no chagrin
I hear you knocking
I'll take it on the chin
Constructive criticism might set you free
From your crass meat head mentality
I hear you knocking
But not sayin' anything
I hear you knocking
Go back to your bin!
.....please vote, leave a comment, constructive criticism or more insults whatever below or maybe see some of my other parodies by entering LucidLupin into parody author search or Google.
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Well put!
DKTOS, but agree with the sentiment
well said ............. something that really needed to be said!!
great job Bee! Darn I wish I'd thought of that! 5's +
Absolutely fantastic honey, very well put fives all the way x
Thanks for the votes n comments folks.... And carol...... I did it for us dahlin' (that'll get em going eh?) ;-D
Well done...but not funny...so...no vote. (But it's a good way to state the truth!)
Cheers Chuck ;)
DKTOS but Good Job!
Made me giggle :) Well said!
Rhyming "thin" with "-thing" was a little weak, but you used one of my favorite words, "chagrin," on another rhyme. A good job. Smiley Lewis did the original, Gale Storm the "pop cover," Dave Edmunds the R&B revival.
Ah... I didnt know about Smiley Lewis original Michael - I shall track it down now.. ;) Thanks to all for comments
This song was a knock out!!!
Checked out Smiley Lewis and like it the best ;)
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