Hey jessy never give a damm about what others think of your work, what matters most is that you keep on writing and the more you do that the better you will become...parody is suppose to be silly, funny and even nonsenseical check out jabberwoky by lewis carrol: "Twas Brillg and the slimey toves did gimble and gyre in the wabe all mimsy were the borgroves and mome raths out gabe" That line makes no sense but boy is it ever famous in english culture... keep up the good work jessy and some day you will be seen for the genuis you are...555

Sgt. Carter, Jessy has already been seen for the genius he is - by me. As Jessy will tell you, I like to call Jessy "The Zen Master of Amiright", because of how Jessy's parodies flow spontaneously and freely in surprisingly unexpected directions from line to line and verse to verse....like a Zen koan. Keep writing, Jessy, I'm a fan of your parodies!

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I like this parody...I agree with Sgt Carter, what matters most is if YOU enjoy your work!?! My parodies probably s**k but I don't care, I laugh when I read them and that is what matters. Not everyone feels where the writer is coming from sometimes, so they miss things or don't understand things and therefore they can be a little critical. I liked your parody, can't wait to see what else you come up with. :)