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Original Song Title:

"Tequila Sunrise"

Original Performer:

The Eagles

Parody Song Title:

"Revision, Pun-wise"

Parody Written by:

Alvin Rhodes

The Lyrics

its another revision, pun-wise
startin' slowly...crackin' wise
for you guys
writin' with my tired hand
hopin' for some screams...but as i try
my muse says, "bye"

every night as my thoughts go 'round
just another useless talent found
i guess i'll write it down

i've written yet another tune, here
cause i couldn't keep from scribblin' on
it won't take long
oh, and its a hollow feelin'
when you start one and fail to end
your mind just bends

sendin' this one in takes courage
wonder if i'll get some votes of "one"
is this too dumb ?
its another revision, pun-wise
this old song don't look the same
and i'm to blame

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Voting Results

Pacing: 4.6
How Funny: 4.6
Overall Rating: 4.6

Total Votes: 9

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    Pacing How Funny Overall Rating
 1   1
 2   0
 3   0
 4   0
 5   8

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John Barry - March 02, 2006 - Report this comment
I think we've all been there.
AFW - March 02, 2006 - Report this comment
You know what they say, "No muse is good muse" and you've proved that it worked here...5's
Paul Robinson - March 02, 2006 - Report this comment
ever-so-clever here, alvin...Think I was there last night with those new 'Dead parodies I was trying to work on...Yup...I hit a 'Dead' end on those...5's ~ ~ ~
Stephen Harrington - March 02, 2006 - Report this comment
We all have, 5s.
alvin rhodes - March 02, 2006 - Report this comment
thanks john AFW paul and stephen
Merry - March 02, 2006 - Report this comment
Nice one, Alvin! :-)
Jeff Reuben - March 03, 2006 - Report this comment
The dreaded Writer's Block song. I've been trying to break out of that myself. Well done.
alvin rhodes - March 03, 2006 - Report this comment
thanks merry and jeff
Larry Hensley - March 05, 2006 - Report this comment
Cool parody!
Tokusou Sentai Blessranger - March 06, 2006 - Report this comment
We'll bring you action,BUT NOT SATISFACTION!!! Crude parody!
Johnny D - September 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Love it. 555
Dr Music - September 03, 2008 - Report this comment
555 and that's no yolk.
alvin - September 03, 2008 - Report this comment
thanks larry, johnny and dr. music

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