This is a good parody. Kind of funny and it had great pace with the original. Also it had lots of potential you used it well. I find itvery hard to parody a very serious song when it's done by Pink Floyd can you help me out?

Led/Floyd---it's kind of difficult to give advice about how to write a funny parody, especially if you plan to be autobiographical AND funny. Just try to open up your mind to ridiculous concepts...Johnny D often relies on "news of the weird" for ideas. Anything funny about your life that you could utilize? Try this for practice--pick a song--any song--and fill in the meter and rhyme scheme with words that just don't make sense. That has led to many of my parodies, such as The White Album parody which you could also look up.