Flipf lops? Sounds like some kind of Norwegian rabbit! I also don't understand the "tosllep andgot eat your feet" part. Sorry.

Which version was this?

'LEAVAA CoMMENT OR DIE!!!!!' ???

Is there some third choice I could opt for? Adagio, I think by the spoken part at the end this could possibly be part II.

Hey Ten... Good idea but work on your spelling and punctuation. Since the audience can only use the sense of sight for reading of the material, attractability is paramount for successful writing. Give your readers something nice to look at. Use a spell check or something like Rhymezone.com to check your meanings and spelling. Take your time writing. Hastily prepared script results in negative feedback and low votes. Work on this some and see if it doesn't help. You have some potential for good parody.

I enjoyed your enthusiasum in this parody. I like silly and expressive. Guy has has some good advice.

Well yeah but I wrote this whol thing in like 2 minutes. And the 3rd ine should have been. No crazy flipflops in the bathroom. And the last part was supposed to be. HOW COULD YOUGO TO SLEEP AN EAT YOUR FEET!!!! AAAAAHHH!! DON"T STEAL LADDY!!!!! Aslo it was TeAcher leave my Spleen alone.

Sorry ! Was just trying to help.=(

I didn't think this was very good - needs proofreading and if memory serves me correctly you haven't done the whole song.

Well Diva, we can try to offer help to our new friends out here but if they don't want to take our advice they will maybe learn after many frustrating writes with negative results.

I did t do the whole song. I just didn't retype the entire thing to show the mentalpeople sang the same thing. What are you guys talking about, I wasn't being mean or anything. I was just saying I wrote it all in 2 minutes and had to leave so there were lots of mistakes.

If you want to live up to your nickname, you should show a little more effort

LEAVEA CoMMENT OR DIE!!!!! When would I have to die? I didn't like this.

You're all CRAZY!!!!!

Err... a hell of a lot of typos. It makes no sence at all.

NOT FUNNY--SONG LEFT UNDONE--AND I HATE ONLY 2 OPTIONS COULD YOU PLEASE GIVE ME ANOTHER CHOICE--I HATE TO DIE AND REALLY DIDNT FEEL LIKE WASTING MY TIME WRITING -THAT 3RD CHOICE WOULD BE NICE----IF YOU ARE IN A HURRY POST IT ONCE YOU'VE HAD TIME TO LOOK OVER YOUR WORK BE4 YOU POST IT TO EVERYONE---CHECKING OUT SOME OF YOUR OTHER WORK--HOPE IT'LL BE BETTER THAN THIS ONE