Song Parodies -> Uneven Symphony No3 For Vocal Chords In A Flat Minor
| Original Song Title: | "Baby's In Black" |
| Original Performer: | The Beatles |
| Parody Song Title: | "Uneven Symphony No3 For Vocal Chords In A Flat Minor" |
| Parody Written by: | Tomario |
this is about what can happen if you take your parody writing too seriously.
Oh dear, what can I do?
it's twelve o'clock and my parody's due,
help me ,doh! write it anew!
i must be dim and all my stresses are back
i know i should've kept track,con-test is back.
my peers,always come through,
they leave feedback while i'm wading through
must be, no! page won't re-new !
it's all a blur,and so are my chances to win
i don't know were to begin,out on a limb.
whoa! another mistake,
still i can,t take a break,can't be swayed.
mere twelve lines todo!
nobody knows what i'm going through
let it go, bid it adieu !
oh it's such a p*ss take
when i make a mistake, so dismayed!
beer can pull you through
maybe a snack and a ciggy or two.
Can't be no! I need the loo !
Pee stains the rim as I get a panic attack,
I know I'm starting to crack,my head is wack.
No fear ,as they subdue,
Got no idea where their taking me too!
Cell me ? oh I've gone cuc-koo
it's twelve o'clock and my parody's due,
help me ,doh! write it anew!
i must be dim and all my stresses are back
i know i should've kept track,con-test is back.
my peers,always come through,
they leave feedback while i'm wading through
must be, no! page won't re-new !
it's all a blur,and so are my chances to win
i don't know were to begin,out on a limb.
whoa! another mistake,
still i can,t take a break,can't be swayed.
mere twelve lines todo!
nobody knows what i'm going through
let it go, bid it adieu !
oh it's such a p*ss take
when i make a mistake, so dismayed!
beer can pull you through
maybe a snack and a ciggy or two.
Can't be no! I need the loo !
Pee stains the rim as I get a panic attack,
I know I'm starting to crack,my head is wack.
No fear ,as they subdue,
Got no idea where their taking me too!
Cell me ? oh I've gone cuc-koo
"the loo" is english slang for the toilet.
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Well written Tomario. I enjoyed this and the rhyming was good as well. 555
LOL!
A fine sentiment well-expressed.
How true, how true.
thanks guys for your comments i missed out my explanation for the title which is quite simple i wanted a "u" song for the monthly comp !
I enjoyed that Tomario, though I am glad you explained the title. It sort of had me wondering !
(SOTM) Pretty clever title, in addition to a clever rendering of the OS!
You've got to love the Amiright tributes
(SOTM) One of the best I've read from you, Tomario. I could feel the anxious dread in every line. Great stuff. 555
(SOTM) Great stuff. 555
(SOTM) You've got to be kidding me right? this is the 8th parody, of the 8, 6 are the best I've ever read by their parodist. Tomario, this was an excellent job by you, and I can relate personally. . .so many comments so little time right? Good one here, and it's not one of the best I've read from you IT IS the best I've read from you, and deserving of a nod, but this month is going to be a rough one to judge.
Very good, Tomario :-)
SOTM-555 is due
(SOTM) As someone who's done quite a few meta-parodies herself, I can definitely sympathize. Great job, and I LOVE the title!
SOTM- Great stuff and VERY awesome title
SOTM - A short OS but you managed to get a lot out of it, and the pacing was very good too! :-)
SOTM - That should teach you to procrastinate!
(SOTM) yes, which really does bring us to a serious question: why the **** DO we do it - it can get VERY frustrating and annoying and disheartening at times, but getting a 111 always cheers you up, knowing that someone's worse off than your good self - lol - good process write tomario - 555
SOTM - Was that vocal chords IN a flat minor or ON a flat minor? Either way, it was delightfully fun.
(SOTM) Mmmm....like fine Chinese food, a delicious parody with MSG, er, I mean, a MESSAGE !! ;-)
Loved it, dont tjhink Ive experienced it yet though
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