Song Parodies -> Me Greasy (Read and comment please)
| Original Song Title: | "Please Please Me" |
| Original Performer: | The Beatles |
| Parody Song Title: | "Me Greasy (Read and comment please)" |
| Parody Written by: | Dominic L. |
Uh... Enjoy
Last night I looked at my cholesterol [Pronounced with 3 syllables]
And it made me lay down and cry, girl.
Oh mon (oh mon)
Grease greasy, whoa yeah, like greasy food.
You should not eat all those junky foods
But I do need to have those pops dude
Corn pops
Need greasy, whoa yeah, I like cheese too
I've been going on a diet
And I've been working out in the gym, I'm fat (Yes, I'm fat)
People like the teasin' you do, but it's no good reason
For you, whoa yeah, to tease me for my fat
Last night I looked at my cholesterol
It looks like I'm about to die, girl
Oh mon
Me greasy, whoa no, Me greasy dude.
And it made me lay down and cry, girl.
Oh mon (oh mon)
Grease greasy, whoa yeah, like greasy food.
You should not eat all those junky foods
But I do need to have those pops dude
Corn pops
Need greasy, whoa yeah, I like cheese too
I've been going on a diet
And I've been working out in the gym, I'm fat (Yes, I'm fat)
People like the teasin' you do, but it's no good reason
For you, whoa yeah, to tease me for my fat
Last night I looked at my cholesterol
It looks like I'm about to die, girl
Oh mon
Me greasy, whoa no, Me greasy dude.
Comment please
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Meh.... Good concept...but it doesn't really work for me; T'ain't funny and seems forced. (You asked...) Keep at it, though...you show alot of promise.
There's four "come on"s (eight if you count the backups) in each verse, so that's an obvious pacing error. And humor's like anything else: It'll never fit if you force it. Maybe I'm a little biased, because of this ditty: http://www.amiright.com/parody/60s/thebeatles473.shtml. When the talent matches the desire, we'll see it. The best thing I can say is keep trying, because you get to Amiright legend status is the same way you get to Yankee Stadium: Practice, young man, practice.
The weird thing is, I started this doing Cheese Cheese me or something, but I decided to make it about bad eating habits... And I put a ... after each Come one variation to represent that it's supposed to be repeated.. Maybe I should have just spent a little extra time on making it easier to read. Thanks for the votes, I'm not really disappointed as I had a feeling this wouldn't go well.
555. =)
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