Song Parodies -> Whining
| Original Song Title: | "Crying" |
| Original Performer: | Roy Orbison |
| Parody Song Title: | "Whining" |
| Parody Written by: | Anonymous Parodist |
This is for all those I offended. Peace?
Well, you are right
I've no style
I'm a vile
steaming pile
Not too good can I write
so, I will pick a fight
but say my name? Oh no
'Cause all can tell
that I'm just a fail-
ure that is whining...
I'm a fool
Whining...
and not cool
Then, I'll give you 1's
if you hated my crap song
and I'll keep whining
whining
whining
whining
'cause you can understand
I'm a douche, not a man
so, I keep whining
I thought that I was brilliant too
but it's true, so true
that I am just a bore
an attention whore
but hey y'all, what can I do?
'Cause no one likes me
so, I'll always be
Whining....
at all you
Whining....
what a goof
I'm almost done
Uh...hey, what rhymes with that?????
So, more whining
whining
whining
whining
whining
whining....
now, I'm through
I've no style
I'm a vile
steaming pile
Not too good can I write
so, I will pick a fight
but say my name? Oh no
'Cause all can tell
that I'm just a fail-
ure that is whining...
I'm a fool
Whining...
and not cool
Then, I'll give you 1's
if you hated my crap song
and I'll keep whining
whining
whining
whining
'cause you can understand
I'm a douche, not a man
so, I keep whining
I thought that I was brilliant too
but it's true, so true
that I am just a bore
an attention whore
but hey y'all, what can I do?
'Cause no one likes me
so, I'll always be
Whining....
at all you
Whining....
what a goof
I'm almost done
Uh...hey, what rhymes with that?????
So, more whining
whining
whining
whining
whining
whining....
now, I'm through
Isn't the OS a nice song?
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Can we consider this an olive branch?
=)
Since your "I Won't Kiss @ss" parody was, I felt, directed at me in particular, I feel I need to respond here. Your apparent bitterness at not being recognized as a top writer can be cured by writing good parodies, it's as simple as that.Slamming tribute parodies, as you found out, is not a recommended way to go, nor is slamming a highly talented and popular writer like Arwen in your comments. That alone is going to bring out her friends, with a barrage aimed at YOU. People will comment if it good. If it's NOT funny, most around here will simply NOT vote or comment, rather than say something negative. If you can't say something good, don't say anything at all. Some here will try to help with comments intended to explain needed improvements in a particular parody, especially for newbies, which is highly commendable. Others don't have time to be a teacher. The best way to improve, IMO, is to study the good parodies and try to incorporate what others use to great advantage. I've seen writers like Red Ant, Matthias, and many more start out and improve incredibly in the years I've been here, just with practice, and interaction on the site. Your song here is a vast improvement on your first one. Keep it up, and you'll get plenty of attention and accolades if they are deserved. No one is intentionally ignored. Write good, funny stuff is all it takes to be recognized. Good luck, and peace for you
I'm not even sure why I made a stink when you first posted to be honest. . .I haven't been around long enough to have it aimed at me, it's just a lot of those people helped make me feel welcome so I guess I just felt it was attacking my friends, not so much me myself. . .I accept peace.
I tried to do two things with this parody...make peace and apologize for my bad behavior by making a good natured tongue in cheek slam at myself (I'm NOT the 1's guy, though...though some thought I was), and to prove that I could write a better paced and maybe reasonably humorous parody (I admit my last parody was pretty poorly written). Anyway, thanks for the votes and comments guys.
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