Song Parodies -> Miss California Dreamin
| Original Song Title: | "California Dreamin" |
| Original Performer: | Mamas and the Papas |
| Parody Song Title: | "Miss California Dreamin" |
| Parody Written by: | Garrett |
All her dreams are gone.
And her sky is gray.
She lost the way.
After a question bout gays.
Now their gonna morn.
Cuz theirs no win in LA.
Miss California Dreamin.
Cuz she shot down the gays.
Some church likes her.
Says next she'll hate abortion ways.
Needed CNN.
To fight away Perez.
But now broke the contract bold.
Nudity of her been played.
Miss California Dreamin.
Now she'll have to pay.
Instrumental area
All her dreams are gone.
And her sky is gray.
Now we think she's is worse.
Than Tom Delay.
I think we should tell her.
To drop out today.
Before we figure out.
She killed Fannie May.
(Miss California Dreamin)
Cuz she hates the gays.
(Miss California Dreamin)
She will not live through this day.
And her sky is gray.
She lost the way.
After a question bout gays.
Now their gonna morn.
Cuz theirs no win in LA.
Miss California Dreamin.
Cuz she shot down the gays.
Some church likes her.
Says next she'll hate abortion ways.
Needed CNN.
To fight away Perez.
But now broke the contract bold.
Nudity of her been played.
Miss California Dreamin.
Now she'll have to pay.
Instrumental area
All her dreams are gone.
And her sky is gray.
Now we think she's is worse.
Than Tom Delay.
I think we should tell her.
To drop out today.
Before we figure out.
She killed Fannie May.
(Miss California Dreamin)
Cuz she hates the gays.
(Miss California Dreamin)
She will not live through this day.
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Clever write on a current topic - good choice on OS song
It's a good attempt, but while nobody's perfect, shouldn't there be *some* standard of language proficiency before calling oneself a writer? "Morn" - "mourn" looked like the intention. "she's is" ... huh? "She is" or "she's", not both, please.
"Cuz theirs no win" looks like you needed "there's" (there is -- no win in LA.) "Theirs" would fit in a different context or punctuation. For help on that tricky subject, see http://www.amiright.com/parody/60s/thebyrds27.shtml.
What Timmy1000 said. Sharpen up the ol' English, and this becomes pretty good. Welcome to AIR, a great crowd with a high bar.
"Cuz theirs no win" looks like you needed "there's" (there is -- no win in LA.) "Theirs" would fit in a different context or punctuation. For help on that tricky subject, see http://www.amiright.com/parody/60s/thebyrds27.shtml.
What Timmy1000 said. Sharpen up the ol' English, and this becomes pretty good. Welcome to AIR, a great crowd with a high bar.
(( * )) Sir, to you, from a Calif. Dreamtress !
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