Song Parodies -> Remains On The Roof
| Original Song Title: | "Rain On The Roof" |
| Original Performer: | Lovin' Spoonful |
| Parody Song Title: | "Remains On The Roof" |
| Parody Written by: | Alvin Rhodes |
apologies to all who thought this was a post-christmas song about a dead santa discovery
peanut goo remains on the roof
caught up with a suction power
drying, while its turning sour
maybe i'll be stuck for hours
working with my tongue
woe is me, i put it away
eating peanut butter...chewing it all day
honey, how long was i choking
on the creamy goo
cause i couldn't even breathe
till the medics pulled me through
peanut goo underneath the roof of skin
pretty gaggy feeling...got my finger sneaking in
i can sit and pry
cause there's plenty left in store
and the way the remnants taste
makes me wanna eat some more
peanut goo remains on the roof
caught up with a suction power
drying, while its turning sour
maybe i'll be stuck for hours
working with my tongue
caught up with a suction power
drying, while its turning sour
maybe i'll be stuck for hours
working with my tongue
woe is me, i put it away
eating peanut butter...chewing it all day
honey, how long was i choking
on the creamy goo
cause i couldn't even breathe
till the medics pulled me through
peanut goo underneath the roof of skin
pretty gaggy feeling...got my finger sneaking in
i can sit and pry
cause there's plenty left in store
and the way the remnants taste
makes me wanna eat some more
peanut goo remains on the roof
caught up with a suction power
drying, while its turning sour
maybe i'll be stuck for hours
working with my tongue
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Sorry aL, DKTOS...again! Someone obviously wasn't too impressed...but I thought it read well!!
Well I do indeed KTOS, and ewwww..... 5's
Alvin, I think your pacing was spot on, but what do I know? (just look how many folks say mine is ALWAYS off) Some of the lines were a dull read, but you matched almost all of the words in the song, which makes it practically impossible to write any good stuff. I am giving you 18 points for pacing, but the Diebold machine says I can only give five. 5-4-5
Five big fingers to pry it out.
Sounds like a real dilemma, Alvin....but I think the worst things to have on the roof of your mouth, are shingles...
not another peanut-butter-stuck-to-the-roof-of-your-mouth parody! - just kidding - 555 esp for the idea
thank you all...and its gotta be JIF for me
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