Song Parodies -> Slipped On The Wire

Original Song Title:

"Great Balls Of Fire"

Original Performer:

Jerry Lee Lewis

  
Parody Song Title:

"Slipped On The Wire"

Parody Written by:

Jason

A clown who can't do his job properly at the circus!
This silly clown tried a tightrope walk
To keep balance needs a lot of thought
He slipped the deck, and broke his neck
Goodness gracious slipped on the wire!

This silly clown tried juggling
Dropped all the balls and they're laughing
I am a prat, and full of tat
Goodness Gracious I am so dire!

This silly clown took the trapeze
Ive got a cold and shouldn't sneeze
Aaa-atishoo, aaa-atishoo
Goodness Gracious Fallen so far!

This silly clown thought he should resign
Can't entertain to save his life
He cut his loss, and saw the boss
Goodness Gracious slipped on the wire!
Your Vote Counts

The parody authors spend a lot of time writing parodies for website. They appreciate feedback in the form of votes and comments. Please take some time to leave a comment below about this parody.

Place Your Vote
 Little   Lots
Meets the pacing
of the original: 
How Funny: 
Overall Score: 



In order for your vote to count, you need to hit this button.
 
Voting Results
Pacing: 5.0
 
How Funny: 4.8
 
Overall Rating: 4.8
 

Total Votes: 5
Voting Breakdown

The following represent how many people voted for each category.

 Pacing How Funny Overall Rating
 1   0
 
 0
 
 0
 
 
 2   0
 
 0
 
 0
 
 
 3   0
 
 0
 
 0
 
 
 4   0
 
 1
 
 1
 
 
 5   5
 
 4
 
 4
 
 
User Comments Follow...

Comments are subject to review, and can be removed by the administration of the site at any time and for any reason.

Kristof Robertson - October 19, 2007 - Report this comment
The frantic OS lends itself to this story, Jase, and you did a pretty good job of it. However (it wouldn't be right if I didn't offer some constructive criticism!) the line "I am a prat, and full of tat" was a bit of a clunker. Also, be careful not to change between 1st person...the "I"...and 3rd person..the "he"...in the middle of the parody (the only time you can get away with this is by using quotation marks, as if the clown is talking). Other than that, good work!
Jason - October 19, 2007 - Report this comment
Thanks Kristof!, Something I have learned!
Kristof Robertson - October 19, 2007 - Report this comment
Just call me Professor Robertson....class dismissed! :-D
Tommy Turtle - October 19, 2007 - Report this comment
As a proud alumnus of Professor Robertson's Uniparody of Ox-gored, would of course agree with his suggestions, but yes, very creative concept and switch. Juggle these three Fives without losing your balls.
Jason - October 19, 2007 - Report this comment
Thanks TT!
Below Average Dave (badave.com) - November 19, 2007 - Report this comment
Professor Robertson and Alumni Turtles. . .ha ha ha :) Love that, theres a parody topic in and of itself! I enjoyed this one, while the song may be short--it's a good warm up and stepping stone for bigger and greater songs.

The author of the parody has authorized comments, and wants YOUR feedback.

Link To This Page

The address of this page is: http://www.amiright.com/parody/60s/jerryleelewis1.shtml For help, see the examples of how to link to this page.

This is view # 147


25 All-Time Greatest Sun Recordings album at Amazon.com

Live at the Star Club, Hamburg album at Amazon.com

Killer Country album at Amazon.com

Jerry Lee Lewis - 18 Original Sun Greatest Hits album at Amazon.com

The London Sessions 1973 album at Amazon.com

Another Place Another Time/She Even Woke Me Up to Say Goodbye album at Amazon.com

Great Balls Of Fire: Original Motion Picture Soundtrack - Newly Recorded Performances By Jerry Lee Lewis album at Amazon.com

Southern Roots/Boogie Woogie Country Man album at Amazon.com

Country Collection album at Amazon.com

Jerry Lee Lewis - Greatest Hits Live Shows on Ea album at Amazon.com
 
 
ALL NEW!!! The amIright 80's MISHEARD LYRICS BOOK now available.
Find Funny Stuff About a Band: