Song Parodies -> Bad Doom Writing

Original Song Title:

"Bad Moon Rising"

Original Performer:

Creedence Clearwater Revival

  
Parody Song Title:

"Bad Doom Writing"

Parody Written by:

Ann Hammond

I see a bad work awritin
I see rhyming broke to day
I see Lyrics same frightnin’
I see now go away

Don’t hit submit tonight
Less you plan to do it right
Does not be long on this sight

Now hear syllables need counting
If not the end of readings soon
Now hear changes undergoing
If not your works a complete ruin

Don’t hit submit tonight
Less you plan to do it right
Does not be long on this sight

Help you get your things togethere
Help you if you request ask why
Looks like I’ve no sat ire inhere
One guy is wired to a guy

Don’t hit submit tonight
Less you plan to do it right
Does not be long on this sight

Don’t hit submit tonight
Less you plan to do it right
Does not be long on this sight
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Meriadoc - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Like the concept - pacing was off a bit, unless that was purposeful for the tone of the parody?
Ann Hammond - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Thanks Meri according to the lyrics I had and my memory this is dead on. Anyway this is more of a message then a masterpiece because I have seen some not so great stuff here recently.
Red Ant - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Pretty good, Ann, though the typos and occasional odd grammar detracted from the read (I don't know if the typos were intentional here...).
TJC - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Ditto Meri & RedAnt
adagio - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
I think this should be filed under 'Required Reading' for every one new to the board or may need it. I got the message stuff, and agree. good job!
Michael Pacholek - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Sad but true, Ann, sad but true. And it will be again, despite your efforts. It's a sad, sad situation, and it's going to get more and more absurd.
Ann Hammond - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
thanks everyone Red Ant- I think the typos you see are intentional. grammer is important so thanks for commenting. Yes file this under required reading
littleCupCakes - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Lady Ann, this really moves! Loved: . . . don't "submit " tonight, unless you plan on doin' it right!! ~Ay Cohiba ~
AFW - May 02, 2008 - Report this comment
Good write about writing
Ann Hammond - May 03, 2008 - Report this comment
Thanks Cup Cakes and AFW

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