Simple original song, simple parody, yet effective. Surprised so few songs have any comments today, but I'll change that on this one as well. This OS gives you very little to work with, so good job at coming up with something that works. . .I know you don't like variations of chrouses and such, but this song is a great example why doing so allows much more comedy. One thing perhaps you might consider, partial variations, keep the title lines or key lines in each chorus and only vary part of the chorus, I do this on some of my own to keep a theme. I don't always vary choruses Jason, but the thing is you don't get the amount of return out of a joke the third time it's repeated, that's what varying choruses allows you to do. You know how to pace a song, and you are a decent writer, but I think if you were willing to challenge yourself, and just try it, you'd like the return. On this parody of a classic song that I personally really enjoy, you earned 5's from me, good luck Jason in your writing endeavors Jason

Thanks BA Dave.

This song is definitely my cup of tea! This will really put a zing to your day! Take 5 Chamomile, 5 Darjeeling, and 5 Green Tea! Also take a bunch of dainty cakes to eat with it.

Thanks Christie!