Song Parodies -> Arrested Again
| Original Song Title: | "Stacy's Mom" |
| Original Performer: | Fountains of Wayne |
| Parody Song Title: | "Arrested Again" |
| Parody Written by: | Josh 2 |
when singing, say some words longer or shorter n ull find the pacings rite
I just got, arrested again x4
I have been suspended, from seven schools (seven schools)
I once tied up my cat, and threw him in the pool (in the pool)
And once when my mom was on a business trip (business trip)
I decided to beat my kid brother with a whip (with a whip)
And I've got 12 kids who are just like me
They're all grown up, Served time for at least three
Years
I just got, arrested again
Looks like that I'll spend the night in the pen
Cos I'm just driving, the neighbours round the bend
But I think It's cool, cos I just got arrested again
I just got, arrested again
I just got, arrested again
I remember when I started burning the lawn (burning the lawn)
E services came out, with there sirens on (sirens on)
Then there was also a time when I grabbed that kid (grabbed that kid)
Shaved off all his hair, but found out he was my son Sid (My son Sid)
And I know that you think that I'm just lying lots
But check on the I'net and you can find my mugshots
I just got, arrested again
Looks like that I'll spend the night in the pen
Cos I'm just driving, the neighbours round the bend
But I think It's cool, cos I just got arrested again
I have been suspended, from seven schools (seven schools)
I once tied up my cat, and threw him in the pool (in the pool)
And once when my mom was on a business trip (business trip)
I decided to beat my kid brother with a whip (with a whip)
And I've got 12 kids who are just like me
They're all grown up, Served time for at least three
Years
I just got, arrested again
Looks like that I'll spend the night in the pen
Cos I'm just driving, the neighbours round the bend
But I think It's cool, cos I just got arrested again
I just got, arrested again
I just got, arrested again
I remember when I started burning the lawn (burning the lawn)
E services came out, with there sirens on (sirens on)
Then there was also a time when I grabbed that kid (grabbed that kid)
Shaved off all his hair, but found out he was my son Sid (My son Sid)
And I know that you think that I'm just lying lots
But check on the I'net and you can find my mugshots
I just got, arrested again
Looks like that I'll spend the night in the pen
Cos I'm just driving, the neighbours round the bend
But I think It's cool, cos I just got arrested again
pls comment and rate
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Let's see... things I would do to make this song a 555: Don't ask people to sing some words longer and some normal or whatever, show it either by th-i-s, or, by, using, commas, otherwise no-one will know how to sing it (i didn't) and therefore you'll lose marks in pacing. Or, you could try adding small words to increase sentence length such as 'and', 'but', 'or' etc. Try varying your choruses. I hate it when you get a good parody which just uses the same chorus over and over, people will lose interest, stop reading and may miss key parts of your song. Also, your humour may not appeal to everyone. I can't really help you there, but try not to include animal cruelty! What you did do well, however, is you chose a well-known song which just about everyone can recognise and therefore one which well get more attention meaning more votes, ratings etc. Also, you've got some good rhymes included which people will like. Nice try, Josh, but better luck next time...
are u related to worst nightmare? just go criticising etc if you cant experiment with pacing well thats your problem anything you wanna discuss joshyd12000 is my yahoo addy
Oh dear. Josh, if you can't take criticism or people telling you what you need to improve (which, if you listened instead of spitting out your dummy, would actually help you), why did you bother including a 'comments' section. You've got to realise that not everybody will praise your work, and you will get 'nightmares' like me who will criticise your work, especially if it's as half-arsed as this. Did you actually read my last comment or are you just throwing your rattle out of your pram because i didn't give you 5s?..
And a piece of advice, I wouldn't go handing out your email address to any Tom, Dick & Harry. You never know who's reading this...
You knwo that thing jsut below my back, kiss it
PS - I didn't actually say that this was a bad parody. I said it could've been better. And I haven't gave any of your parodies 1s. Yet...
Josh, you should be thanking Dumb Ass Kid for his advice rather than attacking him just because he gave you some constructive criticism rather than praise you.
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