Your parody forces one to sing it as " a pa-ROH-dee, yes pa-ROH-dee"...which is kind of funny to do. Some may quibble at this unusual stressing of the syllable, but wtf. :) There is an improvement. 555

5s, is good. I tend to get good ratings myself, but not a high vote count.

I find it very funny, but expected from the first commenter, that a parody that doesn't flow, and has very little humor, is voted 555 by Agrimorphee, who will vote much lower scores on parodies which are much much better than this. Giving this the same score as say, a Claude Prez or Phil Alexander masterpiece is a mockery of the voting system, but considering the source, just another example of poor judgement. I say 4-2-3. Giving false 5's will make this writer think he has written something much better than it is, when constructive criticism couched with encouragement would do him more good in the long run. Being nice has it's place, but a realistic vote is what is needed here, IMO. Fitu, keep working on your writing skills. Your progress will be measured by the number of voters and commenters under your parodies. The more you improve, the commenters will come and let you know. When you inject humor into your work, and make people laugh, they will want to read more of your work and will let you know by their comments. So don't be discouraged by this, I'm just letting you know that there is much truth in your subject matter here. That self realisation is the first step in developing your craft. Keep at it.

Look Fitu, I sincerely found your parody to be quite funny just for the fact that you wrote a parody about trying to write a good parody. (plus the accenting noted in my comment, which Funny Isn't It probably didn't bother reading...). Don't take the backhandedness of this character to heart. I find it very funny that commenters here who have beefs with my commentary never have the huevos to submit them under their own regular screen-name. I will continue to comment and give votes where I see fit, even though I am beginning to feel like it's a case of "damned if I vote nice, damned if I don't."